I'm far from being a good manager but i'm using a very similar tactic which i'm still improving so this can useful for us both.
I see in your tactic:
- Too many TIs, an some of them are useless and/or wrong.
- Higher tempo results in lower passing accuracy. I would remove it and set more direct passing instead if you want fast transitions from defense to attack.
- Your mentality is counter. Why did you set fairly narrow width? Counter means narrow shape for itself. I would set balanced.
- Slightly higher line i think is good because reduces space between defense and midfield which using this tactic is quite big.
- Closing down much more. I can't help you here. I'm fixing it on my tactic also.
- Tight marking and get stuck in i think is ok.
- Remove play out the defense and work ball into box. These orders result on slowing down your tempo.
- Remove look for overlap. You have wb that overlap without setting this TI.
- Crosses. I can't help you here. I'm fixing it on my tactic also.
Roles and duties
- WB. I would change it to fb-at. You are too open at back and with fb-at you will be more solid and still will be dangerous overlapping.
- Change bwm-de to bwm-su and dlp-su to dlp-de. Bwm will provide you forward runs and will close down the opponent higher which is something you want to. Dlp-de will hold your midfield and will stay deep while attacking so he'll be able to offer another passing option back.
- Change Ap-at. An Ap slows down your counters because your players will pass him the ball instead of going fast forward. Maybe a ss or something. I still don't know which role use here but i'm sure an ap must be removed.
- I don't like IF, but that's only my opinion. In fact, an if there must help you to finish crosses coming from right side.
Player instructions.
- Sk: this orders only slow down. I would remove them.
- Wb. On the left side is ok because you have an if who will come narrower but in the right side you have a winger who also stays wide so you have 2 players in the same place.
- Bwm. I think he is enough aggressive so i would remove mark tighter.
Let me know if something changed.